I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kauri Hub and my teacher is Miss Hudson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, June 9, 2021
week 6 Term 2 Writing
Ready aim fire As I look up the sun glisten ln my ey throvgh my sunglasses the rifle feels heary aund powerfml in my strong arms my eye is on the prize ound I caun my heart is pumping I Tighten my index finger auroumd the tngger calming my mird the bngnhy coloured dusc is let free high up into the slsy Iaim... BANG the disc shatters.
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